Do have a draft of your feature screenplay or TV pilot but are stuck?
You’ve done the hard work. You’ve got a first draft or a third or even a ninth but now you’re stuck. You’ve come to the right place.
I will read your pages and give you feedback about what’s working as well as give you some ideas about how to strengthen your script. By focusing on structure, character, dialogue, narrative drive and tone we will work together to get you into a good place for the next rewrite. Because “writing is rewriting!”
Every first draft is perfect because all the first draft has to do is exist. It’s perfect in its existence. The only way it could be imperfect would be to NOT exist.
- JANE SMILEY